Pitch Feedback

After finishing my pitch i felt it went quite well, except slightly hesitating on a few of the questions, but i felt i managed to answer them.....eventually.  questions which came up were things like what inspired the name/genre of the magazine and i felt that these were the questions i did well on.  the question i did struggle on a little was about the types of clothes my artist/band would be wearing and i did manage to give examples of types of things they were going to wear and i was also given advice on this front, so that i had more ideas which could help me when deciding on what i wanted the people in the photographs to be wearing.  for the musicl inspiration of my pitch i had included 2 bands/artists which would not really appeal well in my magazine and so i removed these from the animoto and have now replaced them and made it look better and so this can be watched as the final one. after the feedback i decided that i wanted to have a solo artist rapper and i then looked at the artists i had used as my inspiration and decided that i wanted to base my artist on someone like 'Proffessor Green' and 'Devlin'.